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     I turned in my final draft to critique “Media, Discourse and the Public Sphere” today. I believe that I thought of some good criteria to use when explaining the text for web site writers. The information from the text was informative. I used my thesis in the introduction along with the criteria that I used to bring out the essays important facts and I tried to communicate that to my audience.

     My next essay, I plan to annotate my text the same way, but I plan to read the text thoroughly at least 3 times before I annotate it. During this essay I second guessed myself until realizing the information that I received from the essay that I critiqued. I will try to organize my references, such as, the wiki, readings and lectures to use much more than this essay. This will help with knowing what is expected more during my rough and final draft.

     By working on Essay #1: The Critique, I feel it took much concentration to annotate the text and find a summary. For a synthesis, we need to find a summary in the same way in order to use with other texts.